Down Around Town Posted on December 31, 2012 by acupofsongwriting Reply This is as much a piece of work as it is a play on words and meaning. I try to utilize the last word in the last 3 lines of each verse to speak something to the reader – in addition to what the poem is actually reading. I am trying to find a way to convey meaning both internally and from the roots of the poem, utilizing words that struck a chord with the mind frame in which I am writing. Enjoy! – Words burning up And falling down All around Tinsel town – Not one man Today Can say And “Play” – Words collide slowly Feeling The ceiling Cracking and peeling – A mind collection Bending Sending A thought of pretending – Through veins pumping Asking to quit This shit And just sit – Pockets invaded In time Not one dime Will be mine – Forgetting questions Ask for yours For tours Through U.S. contours – Tipping crashing Feeling tall Until we fall And beginning to crawl – Thoughts collapse With whiskey A bit risky And feeling frisky – Further patience made In time A clear mind Will be a sign – To clear the stage Now Simply adhere to a bow Replying “Ciao” Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading...