Barbaric Nature Posted on July 17, 2013 by acupofsongwriting Reply Baffling word barbaric in nature Wondering if what these words mean Could have foreseen me in danger Biting at every corner confused Bemused with conjunction and function These words have settled me amusing Creating concrete facts I am using Never the language I am abusing Tyring to learn a new flow and rhyme All to be done Not just part time Every day Every line I write Comes a new idea a new inspirations Condensation of the mind And spirit Upon the paper written In my mind I hear it The words fell off my fingers touching Connecting each other puzzles solved The simile resolved I move on to contracted spirits And to a path contingent On the next line The next phrase For each word written Is now where the sentence lays Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading...
Down Around Town Posted on December 31, 2012 by acupofsongwriting Reply This is as much a piece of work as it is a play on words and meaning. I try to utilize the last word in the last 3 lines of each verse to speak something to the reader – in addition to what the poem is actually reading. I am trying to find a way to convey meaning both internally and from the roots of the poem, utilizing words that struck a chord with the mind frame in which I am writing. Enjoy! – Words burning up And falling down All around Tinsel town – Not one man Today Can say And “Play” – Words collide slowly Feeling The ceiling Cracking and peeling – A mind collection Bending Sending A thought of pretending – Through veins pumping Asking to quit This shit And just sit – Pockets invaded In time Not one dime Will be mine – Forgetting questions Ask for yours For tours Through U.S. contours – Tipping crashing Feeling tall Until we fall And beginning to crawl – Thoughts collapse With whiskey A bit risky And feeling frisky – Further patience made In time A clear mind Will be a sign – To clear the stage Now Simply adhere to a bow Replying “Ciao” Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Like Loading...